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Renewal

sunita dverseprompt

Swirls of curls swim atop her head,

she is smooth curves

more than proper for her age

loved generously

yet longs to be

a waif

belonging to no one, nowhere

Heaven leaned to  kissed her forhead,

in the darkness

of indigo night

one lone tear drop fell from the sky,

she doesn’t see

the profusion of  stars,

she’s birthed.

Blinded,

beyond reason,

sees not her crimson  beauty,

nor visits the lavender laced mornings

reserved only for lovers of dawn.

Perhaps she has just forgotten,

and like Spring she will awaken

anew

and recall

her tender years

the return of joy will bloom

bringing forth sweetness and she will be

refreshed from her slumber…

Renewed.

We will see her smile again.

It is our greatest hope.

Linking with dVerse tonight for Poetics. Grace has shared the glorious (and bursting with color) work of artist Sunita Khedekar, who has graciously allowed us to use her artwork for our posts! I was drawn to this beautiful image. Oh, and I am late, I think…but better late than never! OK, now I am ready for bed…hope to catch up visits tomorrow!

14 responses to “Renewal”

  1. susieklein Avatar

    Oh my heart! Love you and your lovely little family dear one. Your mama heart is being covered in prayer. Susie

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  2. Barbie Avatar
    Barbie

    So beautiful my friend. I look forward to catching up with you!

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  3. brian miller Avatar

    i hope that she does find spring….and finds renewal…belonging to no one can be such a lonely place….it is def my hope to see her smile….again…

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  4. sreejaharikrishnan Avatar
    sreejaharikrishnan

    You painted it once more…..wonderful…

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  5. Poet Laundry Avatar

    This swirls with emotion and color! I like the renewal and hopefulness in the end too,.

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  6. claudia Avatar

    oh i do hope the return of joy will bloom and she finds renewal again… for me.. spring always gives me hope and a sense of what is possible…

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  7. shortybear Avatar

    Praying she will be refreshed, and renewed. I love you.

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  8. Ashley Ditto Avatar

    Very very beautiful- sweet friend!

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  9. shanyns Avatar

    LOVE this! :-)

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  10. Grace Avatar

    What a beautiful awakening ~ I love the welcoming of the new season ~

    Thanks for linking up & I like the new layout ~

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  11. jeni4b Avatar
    jeni4b

    A beautiful girl looking so forlorn… a pity. Your springtime poetry opens wonderful possibilities for her.

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